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[You know how I critique, so I'm getting straight in.] I'm not sure if we can give you the feedback you want since this seems to be som...


This is a great example of romantic poetry— I have been avoiding them but this is an exception. Tell me if you have any other suggestio...

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Calypso An
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[playing Mercutio, b&w'd face.]

words make me obsessive.

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Further thoughts on NaPo

Thu Apr 5, 2012, 11:38 AM
...sorry if I'm obsessed, haha.

But it fascinates me what thoughts are on your poetic-forefront day by day. If you could define each day of yours with poetry, what would happen? Though that doesn't actually happen for my poems; it startles me how self-contained they are compared to the rest of my day. What do you think?

ALSO. I really must apologize for the sad lack of reply to all your awesome. I think I've mentioned this. But things are rather messy now, and aaah. I'll get back to you with the soar of thoughts and sunny-ness, but not now.

Observations:

1. It really makes you release a distinctive style, which is awesome especially to watch my favorite poets here.

2. I don't check facts anymore. It's unfortunate, but soon!

3. I think dA has grown more supportive with this; there are great comments around the pieces! If you'd love more on yours, say it and I'll probably link it here or comment myself.

Also, I've started to be involved in NaPoWriMo2012 and hope to write a blog there by 10 days of NaPoWriMo! 5 days left. We'll see, because I have much study too.

I wish you well!
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Birchwing Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013   General Artist
Happy birthday, birthday bud!~ <3
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It's October 29th which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year! 

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raspil Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013   Writer
haven't seen you around in a while, hope all is well. :hug:
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